The enemies took up their positions all ready to attack.
The foot soldiers fought bravely.
The men on horseback charged swiftly.
Every move counts. Intense moments.
Sensing that his defence was leaky, the King retreated.
“Sire! The Queen is in their hands. You must run!”
Before the King could react, I make my move.
“Checkmate!”
The foot soldiers fought bravely.
The men on horseback charged swiftly.
Every move counts. Intense moments.
Sensing that his defence was leaky, the King retreated.
“Sire! The Queen is in their hands. You must run!”
Before the King could react, I make my move.
“Checkmate!”
Excellent! You had me right to the end with the last line reveal. The title "Virtual Battle" and the picture work nicely too. I'm expecting big things from you for our m/f serial novel!
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ReplyDeleteI am Kevin. About the drama, could you pass me your email so that I can pass you the script.
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Ethan, it's almost 12:00pm, Monday, June 1st. Just checked the serial novel and am waiting for your entry. Denzyl threw a real curve with the science fiction take on his submission. Waiting to see what you will come up with.
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